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All those laughs and all those uncountable smiles.
Fake.
I cannot feel happiness,peace or tranquility.Not even love.
Only Hatred,Anger, and Pain.
I look into your eyes and i see nothing.
Nothing but those mistakes i made.
Hollowness,Nothingness a pointless life i live.
I cannot carry this burden anymore.
I'll leave you and everything else I've fought for in this nightmare you call life.
You tug on y shirt begging me to stop.
I ignore you completely.
You yell my name in pain as i let myself go from the ledge.
It's already to late.
Thank you for all those time we shared.
I cherish every moment we had together.
I hope we meet in a better place.
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:

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Something i wrote a time ago

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:icontrinitiy1192:
i really like this...it wasi cantreally putin to words the way it made me feel....(and i call my self a writer...) but its really good

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You look at me with eyes of love, you never hold a grudge....you tink im far to wonderful, to criticize or judge.
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:
thankyou

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"I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!!!"
:icontrinitiy1192:
your welcome ^^

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You look at me with eyes of love, you never hold a grudge....you tink im far to wonderful, to criticize or judge.
:iconcoopermelonlover14:
Al that's really sad :( why would say you can't feel happiness or joy! You can you just never realize it. Like remember the first time we met? I was happy so you have to be happy!

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I never thought I'd change my opinion again
but you move me in a way that I never knew
Okay so this song ROCKS!!!!!!!
Woot Savage Garden OH and SUPERBUS, YELLE, and KAYCEEDEE!!!!!!!!!!

My Heart is a paper, you can draw and write things on it
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:
well i do feel all that but thats something my character said.

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"I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!!!"
:iconcoopermelonlover14:
your character has got probs

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I never thought I'd change my opinion again
but you move me in a way that I never knew
Okay so this song ROCKS!!!!!!!
Woot Savage Garden OH and SUPERBUS, YELLE, and KAYCEEDEE!!!!!!!!!!

My Heart is a paper, you can draw and write things on it
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:
yeah....what?

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"I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!!!"
:iconcoopermelonlover14:
Yeah what what???? What'd you say what about?

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I never thought I'd change my opinion again
but you move me in a way that I never knew
Okay so this song ROCKS!!!!!!!
Woot Savage Garden OH and SUPERBUS, YELLE, and KAYCEEDEE!!!!!!!!!!

My Heart is a paper, you can draw and write things on it
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:
about what is probs but i found out what it was. Hey you in the chats?

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"I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!!!"

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