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And though i know you wouldn't care
Im gonna tell you anyways
Because I have to get this out of my system.
In school I'm teased just cuz i like rock.
"Oh look at that satanic dude" those idiots say.
Just cuz you dress different and listen to something better that crap about superman-ing a you know what.
Doesn't mean im satanic.
I laugh in the face of all those punks.
Idiots your carelesness digs your graves.
You people are pathetic.
Just cuz i wear studed and spiked bracelets.
Cuz you're so caught up inside those empty little head of yours you can't afford to be different because you're scared of what people might think.
But that's just me...
Don't know about you.
Stay in your wold and keep away from mine.
Cuz thats just me.
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Check out :Coopermelonlover14:'s poetry its really good
But read mine too.

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:iconnomenclaturallyscant:
A good poem of how some people are centered to themselves and narrow to other thoughts, along with lack of ability to acknowledge independence without ridicule. Throughout the world, such bitter connections are between people, always others having to agree with the lifestyle or beleifs of oneself. And sadly, it is often those who dominate, whether it is through number or strength, that are less enlightened then smaller, at least in my opinion. And yet, correct enlightenment in the dominating force should not be considered, as domination should not be considered.

A great poem a such problem of society, what may part of wars between people and a general conflict that is keeping populations from generally happy altogether.

Simplistic, well-structured, and effective in the meaning conveyed. A personal itch I suppose, is the grammar. However, I can also see it as being part of the individuality. Anyways, in one interprettation, mine partially, the English is ruled almost under a totalitarian-like state and fails to comply with the message.
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:
thanks and yes it is a problem in society and even in the family

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"I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!!!"
:iconcoopermelonlover14:
Aww honey thank you :hug:

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I never thought I'd change my opinion again
but you move me in a way that I never knew
Okay so this song ROCKS!!!!!!!
Woot Savage Garden OH and SUPERBUS, YELLE, and KAYCEEDEE!!!!!!!!!!

My Heart is a paper, you can draw and write things on it
:iconeternal-fallen-angel:
welcome...

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"I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!!!!"

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